just a dream....
Fog and mist had covered the road...it was dawn i guess...Snow was everywhere...i was all alone...my eyes were searching something...i don't know for what they were yearning..my tired body started running and then i stopped and sobbed.I again tried to run but my legs couldn't move.I fell down..i was on my knees...but kept running...i was ghastly alone.I,then wandered my eyes on the road where no one was but mist and half-darkness...warmth was only in my tears.
come back!please!I am so tired!so scared!come back!
I completed my sentences and they were,too,lost with the gust of wind..I remained alone and waited for him...
He won't come back...
come back!please!I am so tired!so scared!come back!
I completed my sentences and they were,too,lost with the gust of wind..I remained alone and waited for him...
He won't come back...
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I could feel the fear of being left alone and which we all dreaded. I hope he'll come back.
ReplyDeleteA nice post. :)
Sometimes loneliness makes it way to your heart..now never mind of retuning of that person who has gone...
DeleteWhat a nightmare, dear friend. I feel oppresion in your life. How can I help,love?
ReplyDeletejust pray debra!!pray for me!
Deleteoh! I can feel how scared and lonely you felt...life is an illusion anyway!
ReplyDeletethanks for feeling my pain with me friend:)
DeleteThe way you write moves me...I believe in expressing one's inner emotion through writing ...it releases so much from within...
ReplyDeleteI too felt alone...and I do feel alone ...in a crowd..it is suffocating...sometimes, when we meet like minded people/friends, that suffocation goes away for sometime.
thanks for admiring it:)
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