Your foot-steps are too vague to follow
Alone,tired walking by a shore i saw a shadow i followed him,he was passionate for life and i wanted to stay with him.I traced him and got him.But when he hold my hands the time of parting arrived,oh!i had to leave him....
I came back,i was back in this harsh world....I'll again trace him for sure but his foot-steps are too vague to follow......
sometimes things are better to be kept short and sweet. :)
ReplyDeleteyeah!sigh!i really want to hold those moments for my life time:(
ReplyDeletezarnab,
ReplyDeletei must say one thing that you are too good in saying too much with minimum words possible...and in a very effective way.
I really look forward to read you again n again....so just keep them coming.
i am so happy at this time because you appriciated me guide me and i'll write at my level best...thank you so much you made my day:D
DeleteSuch a soulful rendition of your heart. I may not know for sure / exactly about what you are writing here but I can feel...I feel that sometimes, we have to follow memories in the absence of real foot steps I guess...memories are strong enough to give us strength and hope...
ReplyDeleteyour words always comfort my thoughts,i always feel pleasure to see you here:)
DeleteI love this post and would you believe me, I feel I could hear the footsteps but as you said, it's too vague.
ReplyDeleteA very nice post. Keep it up! :)
too vague!!i wish i could make them clear.till then finger cross:D
Deletevery nice post :).
ReplyDeletethank you sister:)
DeleteYou are talented :) I wish you could pat yourself at the back more.
ReplyDeleteYour short verses are very meaningful. I think the more words we try to use to convey our message, the more likely it becomes vague.
Re your post ~ sometimes, I wish I have the courage to be the one to say goodbye...
Thanks for admiring it.:)
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