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Little by little
My dream scatters
I hear a voice
That tells a lie
I get tangled
And my soul dies....

 It flies away
Making its own way
Leaving your paths behind
And the bitter words,ever unkind!
They broke me into pieces
How this fragile heart sighs!



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  1. Saara3 February 2013 at 19:44

    This poem shows how better you're getting with the form. Keep at it.

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    1. Zainab Zainab3 February 2013 at 19:56

      Thank you so much!...Mere pass time nai tha k you k poems k drafts dekho to for sure i'll watch them now and make you aware what to do:D...;)

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    2. Saara3 February 2013 at 19:58

      Yes. You were always a little drunkard. :P

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    3. Zainab Zainab4 February 2013 at 18:25

      Ha ha ha:p....I'll take it as a compliment:D

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  2. *Dark Angel*3 February 2013 at 20:58

    I love it. You have grown up with your writings!

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  3. The Muslimah Corner4 February 2013 at 00:49

    Lovely poem!

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  4. S6 February 2013 at 13:04

    beautiful and heart touching ! I really loved it.

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  5. Aditi WS8 February 2013 at 00:44

    Touching... very deep.

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  6. Zainab Zainab7 March 2013 at 16:23

    thanks:D

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